Tuesday, January 15, 2008
EDM # 123 draw a bell
2008/01/14 Perhaps a little over the top for an EDM : ) but I have this lovely bell so I wanted to have some fun with it. This took me two days, as the image is stippled then painted. Sooo I've still been meeting my goal by drawing daily. : ) This is 15"x20" on Canson 140lb cold press. Micron marker 02, water colours, liquid acrylic. Too large for the scanner so this is a photo. Colour is not as intense and image not as sharp, otherwise close. BUT...something is bothering me about it!Below I have reworked the image to round out the bell, add highlights. This seems to be the fix I was looking for! Thanks members of EDM for your aid!
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I think it looks very nice - rather folk art like - and charming!
ReplyDeleteI think this is GREAT!! Not at all "cutsey"....very real and old looking....nice job! deni...;)
ReplyDeleteIt's not at all cute, and it's a lovely bell. My first thought on seeing this was that the bell was flat, like a metal cutout. Maybe some more shading would address your concern -- but it's very attractive as it is.
ReplyDeleteThis is the first time I am visiting your blog and after a few moments navigating around I find myself wishing to return again soon, lovely work!
ReplyDeleteThe bell background is just wonderful and you have handled the base of the beautifully. I agree with Nancy though, the actual bell is missing a few highlights and some darker values to create a roundness and currently appears a little flat. I think that may be what is bothering you about this piece
I think this looks fine but not old fashioned. The bell itself looks old fashioned, but not the drawing.
ReplyDeleteYes, Maybe that is the issue. The bell needs more shading, it does look flat. Perhaps I'm thinking overall it looks like a big hallmark card or something. Add that with the folk art element and I can see why I suspected "cutesy."
ReplyDeleteI think I'll work a little more on it. : ) Thank you all!!!
I really like it -- before and after the fix ;-) Great colors and texture!!
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